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Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2018 12:16 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
Here we will discuss Dr. Park's paper on breast cancer and bone metastasis.

Manuscript Edits Part 1

PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2018 1:24 am
by efrain.gonzalez0
I have attached a file with the edits that I managed to make in an hour and a half. As an additional note I think that the runs on the orders with 16+ variables should be redone. When i discovered the bug in my code last week I found that most likely my code was not performing well for orders with more than 12 variables. I was able to fix it and I am not sure what the maximum amount of variables is now but I checked it at 37 variables and it is performing as expected.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2018 12:35 pm
by ddolbae01
Efrain, Thank you for valuable comments.
I revised manuscript following Efrain's comments and added the result of calcprobability.
Also, I removed the contents with animal study in the present manuscript.

I think the Efrain recommendation about adding result using update code is really good idea.
However, if professor Yoo and Efrain will accept, I want to add the result of that into subsequent manuscript.
I will make the subsequent manuscript with the results of update code, structure code and animal study.

I attached the revised manuscript.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2018 7:20 am
by cwyoo
ddolbae01 wrote:Efrain, Thank you for valuable comments.
I revised manuscript following Efrain's comments and added the result of calcprobability.
Also, I removed the contents with animal study in the present manuscript.

I think the Efrain recommendation about adding result using update code is really good idea.
However, if professor Yoo and Efrain will accept, I want to add the result of that into subsequent manuscript.
I will make the subsequent manuscript with the results of update code, structure code and animal study.

I attached the revised manuscript.


Here are my comments only working on the Abstract. Please revise and review.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2018 4:03 pm
by ddolbae01
I tried to revise the manuscript following Professor Yoo's and Efrain's comments.

I attached the revised form.

Please, give me the feedback.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2018 11:26 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
Good evening,

I have attached an edited version of the manuscript below. I will continue to work on it tomorrow.

Respectfully,

Efrain Gonzalez

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2018 7:35 am
by cwyoo
ddolbae01 wrote:I tried to revise the manuscript following Professor Yoo's and Efrain's comments.

I attached the revised form.

Please, give me the feedback.


My comments on Introduction section is attached.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2018 5:29 pm
by ddolbae01
I revised and added some contents following the second comments of Professor Yoo and Efrain.

If you give the feedback, I will reflect the comments as soon as possible.
I attached the revised manuscript.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2018 7:27 am
by cwyoo
ddolbae01 wrote:I revised and added some contents following the second comments of Professor Yoo and Efrain.

If you give the feedback, I will reflect the comments as soon as possible.
I attached the revised manuscript.


This is the revision of the first part of Method section.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2018 10:59 am
by efrain.gonzalez0
I have attached below another edited version of the manuscript it begins with the first comment in the Introduction and ends just before the section on Data mining and Selection of candidate genes. I will finish the rest of the edits today so that we can all discuss any final editing tomorrow.