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Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2018 4:47 pm
by cwyoo
cwyoo wrote:
ddolbae01 wrote:I revised and added some contents following the second comments of Professor Yoo and Efrain.

If you give the feedback, I will reflect the comments as soon as possible.
I attached the revised manuscript.


This is the revision of the first part of Method section.


This is the revision of the second part of Method section right before Method Section V. Validations.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2018 6:52 pm
by ddolbae01
I revised the recent updated manuscript by professor Yoo.
I tried to revise the contents following professor Yoo' comments about validation of model.

If Efrain and professor Yoo give me the further comments, I would reflect those comments.

Thank you for your time and efforts.

I attached the manuscript.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2018 7:09 am
by cwyoo
ddolbae01 wrote:I revised the recent updated manuscript by professor Yoo.
I tried to revise the contents following professor Yoo' comments about validation of model.

If Efrain and professor Yoo give me the further comments, I would reflect those comments.

Thank you for your time and efforts.

I attached the manuscript.


Here is the revision of the Methods section. Please review the Methods section and update Results, Discussions, and Abstract according to the new Methods section.

New edits

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2018 11:40 am
by efrain.gonzalez0
I have attached the edits that I conducted yesterday to the rest of the paper. They are mainly grammatical with a few comments regarding sentences that I believe need restructuring. The editing for this version began at the section titled Data mining and Selection of candidate genes and ended at the Conclusion.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2018 3:20 pm
by ddolbae01
I revised the manuscript following professor Yoo's comments.
I attached the manuscript and cover letter.

If professor Yoo give me the comments for this manuscript and cover letter, I will revised the manuscript.
And I will try to submit this paper until tomorrow morning.

Could Efrain give me the comments and proofread the manuscript until today?

Thank you for your time and help .

Sincerely,

New Edit

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2018 10:38 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
I have attached an edited version of the manuscript to this post.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2018 3:52 pm
by cwyoo
ddolbae01 wrote:I revised the manuscript following professor Yoo's comments.
I attached the manuscript and cover letter.

If professor Yoo give me the comments for this manuscript and cover letter, I will revised the manuscript.
And I will try to submit this paper until tomorrow morning.

Could Efrain give me the comments and proofread the manuscript until today?

Thank you for your time and help .

Sincerely,


This is the revision of the results section with minor edits on methods.

New Edit

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2018 4:42 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
Below I have attached some edits that I performed on the Results section of the manuscript.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2018 8:03 pm
by cwyoo
cwyoo wrote:
ddolbae01 wrote:I revised the manuscript following professor Yoo's comments.
I attached the manuscript and cover letter.

If professor Yoo give me the comments for this manuscript and cover letter, I will revised the manuscript.
And I will try to submit this paper until tomorrow morning.

Could Efrain give me the comments and proofread the manuscript until today?

Thank you for your time and help .

Sincerely,


This is the revision of the results section with minor edits on methods.


This is the revision of the discussions and conclusion sections.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2018 9:00 pm
by ddolbae01
I posted revised manuscript following as professor Yoo's comments.
I attached the revised file.