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Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2018 9:27 pm
by ddolbae01
I posted the final version of manuscript.

Could professor Yoo mention about funding information at submission process?
Funding information: Chun Kee Chung supported by grant no 03-2015-0180 from the SNUH research fund.

Following list is about recommendation reviewers.
1. Chyung hyoo Kim email: jeuelkim@gmail.com
2. Chi Heon Kim email: chiheon1@snu.ac.kr

I attached the final version of manuscript.

Thank you

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2018 9:59 pm
by ddolbae01
I attached the manuscript without comments.

revised manuscript for submission into Breast Cancer Researc

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2018 8:42 pm
by ddolbae01
I revised the previous manuscript following submission guideline of Breast cancer research.
I posted the revised manuscript.

If Professor Yoo and Efrain give me feedback, I will revise the comments after that.

Sincerely,

Edits to recent manuscript

PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2018 11:25 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
Good evening,

Below I have attached my edits to the recent manuscript posted by Dr. Park.

Respectfully,

Efrain Gonzalez

Re: Edits to recent manuscript

PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2018 9:56 am
by cwyoo
efrain.gonzalez0 wrote:Good evening,

Below I have attached my edits to the recent manuscript posted by Dr. Park.

Respectfully,

Efrain Gonzalez


Here are my revisions on the abstract portion.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2018 2:36 pm
by ddolbae01
Hello,

I revised the manuscript following the comments of Professor Yoo and Efrain.

The next target journal, Breast Cancer Research, recommends the maximum number of words in abstract as within 350.
Therefore, I reduced the words number in Methods of abstract and try to keep the contents of Results.

Could you give me the feedback?
Sincerely,

Sung Bae Park

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2018 11:05 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
Good evening,

Below I have attached some new edits to the manuscript as well as some new comments. I will look at the Results and Discussion sections tomorrow and provide comments and edits for those sections.

Respectfully,

Efrain Gonzalez

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:11 pm
by efrain.gonzalez0
Below I have attached my edits for the Results and Discussion section of the manuscript.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2018 12:06 pm
by cwyoo
efrain.gonzalez0 wrote:Below I have attached my edits for the Results and Discussion section of the manuscript.


Here are my comments / revisions.

Re: Osteolytic metastatic bone manuscript

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2018 1:42 am
by ddolbae01
I revised the manuscript that was edited by Professor Yoo and Efrain.
I tried to reflect the comments of professor Yoo and Efrain into the manuscript.
sincerely,